Symphony // F

[SAGE™]

SYMPHONY !

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I've been around the world in the pouring rain
Nickname: Sym
Gender: Female
Age: 4 Years old

Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/Ae
Sire: Remon
Dame: Remune

Species: Transylvanian Wolf
Eye Color: A Deep Orange
Coat Color: Mostly black, with brown highlights, especially around her face. The brown surrounds her face, like a mask.
Markings: A scar runs over her left eye, a long scratch, traceing her muzzle.
Weight: 94 lbs

Feeling out of place, feeling strange
Appearance Description:

The pelf of Sym glows in the moonlight, making her the shade of a shadow, blearily audible in the night. Her face is surrounded by black and brown layers, blending herself with a irony unlike any other.

Her eyes, gold and orange, seem to stick out in the night and day. YOu see it, over there... What is it? Orange orbs, flowing in the shawods. SLowly, the figure is more real. A wolf! Her eyes are an impression of topaz, and draw many in.

Her legs are long, and lanky. She is skinny, and yet has built muscles, trained for swiftness. Her legs are all almost of equal length, making her movements unlike any other.

Her bone structure is quiet well, and blend under her fur. no deformities at all. SHe seemed like an angel, and her muzzle's smile proved it more. Long lanky legs open to a tall figure in almost perfection.

Take me to a place where they know my name
Personality:

To start, the bad thing. The worse, at least. She is very cocky, often getting her in trouble, and spars. However, even when she looses, she comes up with some cocky remark. Another thing is her impatience. It makes her very... Stubborn.
I predict the worse part of her, though, is yet to come here. She is a very misunderstanding wolf, and accusing with that. SHe blames others wen she cannot blame herself.
Now, perhaps, the good side? That is, if she has one. Well, one good thing might be is she has her sanity. She has not completely lost it! Unlike most her family, anyhow. apparently, she saw something in life.
Sym is a very... Convincing wolf, and persuasive wolf. I might put in she is loyal, and very often does make enemies. However, she awaits the day for perhaps a friend.

Weaknesses:

• Impatient
  
• Stubborn
  
• Cocky)

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Strengths:

• Sane
  
• Convincing
  
• Smarticals

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History:

OT DOING!.

Cause I ain’t met nobody that looks the same
Desired Pack: Warriors
Picture URL: none
Number of Characters?: this is 2
Bio Password: We love Serena!
How did you find us?: Lu :3

Credits
Bio Template credited to Lunar Oasis
Character idea and writing credited to respective creator
Lyrics written by Will.I.Am – Traveling Song
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[☼ Sunstorm]

Please proofread through the descriptions because there are quite a few spelling errors.

Also, you did not fill out the bottom portion, and I need you to do so before I can accept her. ^^

[Makarov]

]As Sunstorm said please proofread the spelling errors in the personality and appearance. If it helps and you don't have a way to check for spelling errors, the Firefox browser has a built in spellcheck.

Also the password provided is not the correct one. Please make sure you re-read through the rules regularly to get rule and password updates.

[Serena]

Looks good to me. And as I see it, all the mistakes the other staff members have pointed out has been corrected. Good job. ACCEPTED! Now hurry and get to the Come Forth Warriors thread for acceptance.